Posted by Soumya Mukherjee at 11:11 AM
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He found a voice
The voice that tells him it's time
The time to make a move
A move that defines a decision
A decision that brings the thrills
The thrills that make us all better
So better that
oh lovely Soumya... you know i didn't even know what it was aboutand i read it aloud. it sounded so awesome man. i liked the previous version too. The 'I' version. Infact I feel that had a better voice. But this is excellent too. :-)
ReplyDeleteloved it thoroughly.
Yes I changed the I version to He version. Glad you liked it so much Aditi. :)
ReplyDeleteits like an uncontrolled chain reaction
ReplyDeleteYep! :)
DeleteBeautifully written, Kiddo :-)
ReplyDeleteI loved how everything spirals off from one word and boils down together to bring across what you are feeling.
Life really is worth living, isn't it? :)
Keep writing! ^_^
Oh damn, I missed this comment! Sorry, and thanks a lot! Kiddo noyi aami -_- :D :D and yes, it is totally worth living. :)
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